Because of the high technology, the photos now can cover our shortcomings on everyone’s body, such as pimples, wrinkles, scars and so on. All of these could be made up by the software. Like the photo bellow, the girl whose bosom became much bigger and body became much thinner, and her skin became whiter. Let’s look at the next picture on the left side; the woman had many wrinkles on her face. But after decorating, the picture on the right side, the lady’s face became brighter, smoother and 10 years younger. We know that Photoshop help us a lot. The saying goes the camera never lies. I think that it was true in the past but accompany with technology advance. And now people are smarter, we can cover our shortcomings by computers and the best shot angles to make us look better.
2010年3月31日 星期三
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上面這些色情人渣是哪裡來的???
回覆刪除把他們刪了!!!
Hi Ruby,
回覆刪除Sorry to see these unconfortable messages on your blog.
你的文意流暢，但是文法要多下功夫。以下的錯誤，請你訂正
1. Because of the high technology, the photos now can cover our shortcomings on everyone’s body. Such as pimples, wrinkles, scars and so on.
請把such as跟第一句連在一起
2. Like the photo bellow, the girl whose bosom became much bigger and body became much thinner, and skin became whiter.
這裡的skin前要加所有格
3. Let’s look at the next picture; the woman had many wrinkles on her face on the left side.
分號請改成--
on the left side請移到picture後
4. But after decorating, the picture on the right side, the lady’s face became very brighter, smooth and looks younger more than 10 years.
第一、very要刪
第二、這裡的became brighter, smooth and looks younger並沒有parallel
第三、younger more than 10 years改成10 years younger
5. We could know that Photoshop give us a big help.
為什麼加could???
give的動詞形式不對
7. I thought that it was true in the past but accompany with technology advance, and now people are much smart. We could cover our shortcomings by computers and a point of view to make us look better.
第一、thought要用think
第二、這兩句的斷句不正確、文意因此不順，請修改
第三、muct smart要改成比較級
第四、could要用can
第五、我完全不明白什麼叫做a point of view to make us look better，請大大的修改